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Ocean Breeze

loose tumbling sea breeze sets waves of tense limbs free – empty beach chairs For SKAT's Picture Perfect 2 Contest

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David Meade

Date: 11/16/2015 5:59:00 PM

I missed this one but glad I see it now. Cloudy and rainy here but I enjoyed the sea, sand and warm breeze. Sitting here visiting with you . . . "yes, family is fine . . . and yours . . . good!!"

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 11/16/2015 8:40:00 PM

Yes, my family is fine. My days have been dark, and they are my God-given light. Without them...well, I don't like to think about it...glad to hear your family is good. I didn't know you had been away because I haven't been here in months myself. I'm trying to write again...looking for an escape. Thanks for the visit. It brings a smile to my face.

Samiha Zubair

Date: 10/2/2015 9:15:00 AM

A maze of meanings expressed in few words

Samiha Zubair
Date: 10/2/2015 9:16:00 AM

A difficult feat

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 7/5/2015 6:07:00 PM

Of course it's a win. Great imagination.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/26/2015 8:08:00 AM

A delightful haiku, Rhonda; the image you present is perfect! Congrats on a fine win. hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2015 9:25:00 PM

big congrats, RHonda I wrote an etheree years ago with this same "idea" of the empty beach chairs. I really love that last line.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2015 8:59:00 AM

Great mood! Congrats!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/25/2015 5:02:00 AM

congrats on placing Rhonda hugs

Skat A

Date: 6/25/2015 1:28:00 AM

Rhonda... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/23/2015 5:01:00 AM

- Rhonda, a beautiful haiku ! - Good luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/21/2015 1:11:00 AM

Rhonda, this a beautiful haiku. I love going to the beach. Great job. Good luck in the contest:)Alexis

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/20/2015 3:26:00 PM

Oh...I do love the beach, Rhonda. Hope to get some sun next week. Lovely haiku...Loved that first line....Hugs, dear.

Darlene Gifford

Date: 6/20/2015 9:02:00 AM

A beautiful beach image. You put me there. My best to you in the contest.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/20/2015 10:23:00 AM

Thanks, Darlene!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/20/2015 1:05:00 AM

Are you inviting me? :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/20/2015 10:25:00 AM

Anytime! It's a little hot right now on the Florida beaches, Arthur, but winters are beautiful. :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2015 9:09:00 PM

oh YES, Now THAT is a picture perfect haiku

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/20/2015 10:27:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea...I'm not sure what SKAT's looking for...I hope she likes it.

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/19/2015 8:18:00 PM

tumbling sea breeze along with lightning will cause a lot of empty beach chairs..reminds me..what became of your florida contest?

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/19/2015 8:30:00 PM

It's judged and ready to post...was waiting for calmer waters around here. I may be waiting a long time, so I'll post the winners soon and hope for smooth sailing!