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Ocean Heaven

OCEAN HEAVEN A moon large enough to float On the distant moving swells Cradles my rocking boat With warm waves fetching paint-filled sea shells, Spilling them into the sweet sunset of Seychelles. Come, stay forever close to this idyll That offered Gaugin emancipation: A tall palm leans heavily to fill And bear fruit - at all times of the season - On its atoll blown by the winds of creation. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written by Sydney Peck Entered in Gail Doyle's Contest "A Tropical Theme Under The Moonlight " ( this verse form is a near-quintain)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/19/2012 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Tropical Theme" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/19/2012 4:51:00 AM
wowsie... a fresh slant from you, KC.. congrats big time!.... how are you?:)
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Date: 3/17/2012 8:24:00 AM
A different take on the theme of the contest.Enjoyed the read.Congrats Sydney on your win.
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Date: 3/17/2012 6:40:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this morn..I hope that life has great things in store for your children and grandchildren...Congrats on your win..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 3/16/2012 5:59:00 PM
Finely a different more mature take on the topic! THANKS! hope all is well! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 3/16/2012 12:26:00 PM
Well done, Sydney. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/16/2012 10:33:00 AM
I have always wanted to see the moon as big as they potray on the TV it would be magical to sit and watch it . Love this Sydney congratulations xx
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Date: 3/15/2012 1:48:00 PM
A beautiful poem Sydney, love it. - Luck to you in contest - hope for a win. - oxox Anne-Lise
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