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Ocean

Ocean Waves unfold deep oceans, As mystic pearls shimmer at the shores of pure moonlit nights. Written Dec 9th, 2015 For contest- language of water Sponsor- Nette Water body- ocean Awarded N/A Now entered for "Screwed IX contest" by rob carmack Awarded 6th place win

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/28/2015 3:31:00 AM

Hi Upma! I am pleased that this time round this delightful poem found its rightful place on the winners' list! Congratulations!! ~ Regards // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/26/2015 7:45:00 PM

Dr. Upma, congratulations on your win and placement in Rob's contest. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2015 3:28:00 PM

I am SO glad to see this now with a win. BIG congrats to you. this is one of your best poems ever. In fact, I think I will fave it!!

Skat A

Date: 12/25/2015 3:24:00 PM

DR UPMA, Congratulations on your wonderful win. *** Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/24/2015 6:44:00 PM

Upma, congratulations on placing in the contest. Janice

Paul Callus

Date: 12/11/2015 4:37:00 PM

I love the imagery, especially those shimmering pearls! Would have liked to see it on the winners' list. ~ Have a lovely weekend, Upma:) ~~ paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2015 3:37:00 PM

this is SUPER nice, Upma. Gosh, did it not win??? I see no congratulations and I really love it!