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Ocean

Ocean (Poem) Pressure Depth Darkness Solitude Beauty Life In the blue expanse life goes on Oblivious to the world above Indifferent to war and grief Where the only rule is survive To find beauty, you needn't look far For it swims all around In all shapes and forms Through the light and the dark The fountain of life Surrounding us all And waiting for our return

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Date: 4/18/2013 12:13:00 AM
Taylor, you have something here that I like. It's raw, unpolished, but oh so beautiful. Keep writing and expressing yourself. You're on the right track. The value of a thought far surpasses any rule of structure or grammar. Doug
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