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Ocean

rollicking with restless waves on a tranquil seashore… saffron-hued sapphire waves lapping at my feet, I feel an Ocean of Love, an Ocean of longing, an Ocean of memories, surrounding me ~ yearn for a few precious moments with you. a sonata of symphonic chimes soaring from a Buddhist temple on the shore, serenade far away… the conch, the shells, the wind - all join together to sing a melodious chorus of the sea ! imagine myself, a traveller from the ancient world of history walking through ages, wandering for hundreds and hundreds of miles, crossing seas and oceans, hills and dales of the universe, in quest of love, kindness and inner peace. March 25, 2023 Writing Challenge - "O" words Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France FIRST PLACE

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Date: 3/27/2023 7:07:00 PM
Very nice, Mala! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/27/2023 10:34:00 AM
- An ocean with lots of love in every wave, Mala - Beautiful written :) Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/26/2023 9:14:00 PM
Like an ocean travelling through the length and breadth of the world in search of love and peace. Beautiful penning. Congratulations Mala on your first place win.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/27/2023 6:02:00 AM
Dear Valsa, Thank you so much for your visit and inspiring words. I wouldn't be able to continue my journey without talented and inspiring friends like you. Truly appreciate your comment.
Date: 3/26/2023 4:37:00 PM
Dear Mala, Your Ocean is so calming and welcoming. Congratulations!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/27/2023 6:00:00 AM
Dear Ann, Thank you so very much. This is our journey in a vast ocean of thoughts and images.
Date: 3/26/2023 1:19:00 PM
I loved the journey and your quest Mala. Congratulations on your win!:)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/27/2023 5:58:00 AM
Dear Linda, Appreciate your comment, My Dear Friend. Your comments inspire me in my journey.
Date: 3/26/2023 12:41:00 PM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'O' Words with your beautiful poem. I love it, blessings, Constance
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/27/2023 5:57:00 AM
Dear Constance, Thank you so much for the placement. I feel honoured! Your contests give me a chance to express my thoughts - themes are brilliant!
Date: 3/25/2023 10:37:00 AM
Hello Mala, whether it is an ocean, river , lake or a stream. water is calming for the soul. Love & Friendship, /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/25/2023 11:06:00 AM
Hello Mala, Your welcome. my friend. Love &Friendship, Darlene.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/25/2023 11:00:00 AM
Very true, Darlene. Thanks for your thoughtful comment.

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