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Ocean - a Pleiades

Over pelagic reefs, oscillating waters obfuscate sunken fetes. Octopi tango while oarfish flash titian fins. Opulent paradise: oblivious to us. 4/5/21 - written for Kim Merryman's "Pleiades O" poetry contest - 1st place

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Date: 5/18/2021 6:48:00 AM
It's a Beautiful Poem! Congratulations!
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Date: 4/9/2021 2:55:00 PM
Congrats on this creative winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 4/7/2021 2:57:00 PM
wow, talk about impressive vocabulary.Very well done, and congrats!
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Date: 4/7/2021 1:41:00 PM
Kathleen, I enjoyed your creative description of the ocean! I think my favorite part was the "octopi tango". Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/6/2021 10:17:00 PM
Great write, Kathleen, congratulations on your Pleiades win. Eve
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Date: 4/5/2021 5:25:00 AM
This is an excellent Pleiades, Kathleen! I enjoyed the tour of your oceanic paradise! ~ Regards // paul
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