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Obtuse Mother

You feign contrition No body for resolve Absolute you’re dying eyes Cocoon in silken wrappings The inner being consoles Obtuse mother With her little stranger Those counterfeit tears Bellows no more Lack of compunction Halo of strife I didn’t ask To be born But I was begat To this life

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Date: 11/15/2013 1:06:00 PM
I really enjoyed your works! Thanks for your comments on my work "obtuse mother". You are very talented! Hope to read more from you. I'm working now on transcribing more from pencil to document format. Keep up the great work, and keep the pen handy my fellow poet. Thanks for alerting me to your wonderful poems!
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Date: 11/15/2013 11:41:00 AM
Wow, very interesting poem, with deep meaning. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of mine, might find some you like. Peace.
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Andrea Travis
Date: 11/15/2013 1:09:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by to check out my works! Unfortunately I replied by posting your reply to my own poem! Oops!

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