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“Obstacle In Our Path” Elephants Side to side Side to side Rhythmically rocking my enormous body and head Side to side Side to side Like a pendulum my trunk swings side to side I'm only doing this because I'm bored ~ My family and I walk for miles and miles Foraging, Dusting, Mud wallowing, Swimming and socializing ~ We encounter an obstacle in our path Humans have built a fence and block our path Evidently they forgot that we never forget the path we always take? ~ I tense my enormous frame Flare my ears and with a Trump of rage I gather my herd and together we work and push the fence down To clear our path ~ Side to side Side to side We walk across and melt into the bush ©By: Eve Roper 8/28/2015
Contest Name: Giant animals Sponsor: Nathan D.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/18/2015 1:33:00 PM
good one Eve... SKAT
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Date: 9/17/2015 2:32:00 AM
A big 7 Eve for your sweet write! Congrats!
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Date: 9/16/2015 11:02:00 PM
Wonderful write n win Eve! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/16/2015 6:47:00 PM
Hi Eve, happy to see your elephant poem is on the winner's list! I so much enjoyed your personification! I love elephants too! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/16/2015 12:51:00 PM
thank you
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/16/2015 2:09:00 PM
Thank you, Nathan, for being in your contest Hugs Eve
Date: 8/28/2015 9:14:00 AM
Beautiful descriptive write and oh Eve I love the image too - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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