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It is a cloud laden sky That cloaks the moon As acrid air inside Chokes too soon And broken hourglass Creates sand dune

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Date: 2/17/2024 6:28:00 PM
Very creative and the poem activates my imagination, I want to know more dear.
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Date: 2/18/2024 3:10:00 AM
Operating within the 6 line limit of the contest. Who knows where limited words might have led if we just decide to say more - often intriguing. Thank you for your comment x

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