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Obscuring Mist

Mystic presence I feel! this makes me shiver! Its magnetic aura makes me aware, suddenly I feel restless I cannot bare! Mist the feeling makes me lay down biting my lips I hear my heart beats and a rush of red on my cheeks Smelled my scent Sweet soft obscure scent... and the sudden feeling of obscuring mist! Then I have you smelled a breath. A trace of the mist on my lips. An invisible, warm and gentle kiss! The touch outlining my legs makes them half apart And I tasted it... I cried! Damn, obscuring mist! Inner Whispers ******** Date: March 7, 2014 Free Verse 5th Place win Contest : Danger by Sheri Fresonke Harper Date: 3/26/2014 11:25:00 AM "You capture the quality of misty moments, Inner Whispers, very lovely. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for entering my contest, sorry for the delay in telling you so."

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Date: 3/29/2014 4:50:00 PM
INNER, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..... Awesome poem!! Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/29/2014 8:19:00 PM
thanks SKAT! This is my first win here...and i will treasure this chance!
Date: 3/26/2014 11:25:00 AM
You capture the quality of misty moments, Inner Whispers, very lovely. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for entering my contest, sorry for the delay in telling you so.
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Date: 3/27/2014 4:44:00 AM
Hello Maam Sheri! Wow...i am awed! Thank you for giving me the chance and believing on myself! This win made me jump with joy! Haha! Thank you, Maam!
Date: 3/22/2014 10:22:00 PM
Very clever creation, Congrats on the fine win, inner
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Date: 3/27/2014 4:42:00 AM
wow! this really won? Thanks Dr. Ram! I am thrilled!
Date: 3/7/2014 12:39:00 PM
sensual...very well written. // paul
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Date: 3/9/2014 11:57:00 PM
Thanks, Paul Callus

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