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Below is the poem entitled Obscure which was written by poet Hsu Mr. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Literature is herself a clown.
Without this coming first,
no great art is made
except glooms of queer authors
peddling like traders of a trade.
 The second needed
is the dying of the tedious
the writer must drown in happiness
and be filled in joy.
What covers will stay
and what empties will become
an empty road stand,
no beauty or use per say.
And last,the writer needs to master
the ideas of the whirling clock,
the deep jokes in ordinary lines,
and the skills of hung
heads,swinging apart their blood;
executed for what is done,
the writer executes the book
and the book,the image stays.

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  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:32:00 PM
    Great work Mr Hsu, Best regards, Sekar

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 7:43:00 AM
    Black book with gold scribes, Bible talks and Jesus hushes Mark the page, like a sage, enjoyed xxx

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 3:21:00 PM
    literature is herself a clown indeed.Enjoyed reading your thoughts..Welcome to ps

    Mr Avatar Hsu Mr
    Date: 8/29/2013 5:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 11:26:00 AM
    I enjoyed this very much, but it seems... unfinished in a way. Like it's missing the true end. :)

    Mr Avatar Hsu Mr
    Date: 8/29/2013 5:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you enjoyed it,i actually wrote this two years back. You may be right,but somehow i don't have as much passion for this one now,maybe i will edit it again someday. Thanks!