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Oblivion

Remember me as colours fade away and brooks dry away and nature cry the day Remember me if your eyes ever cried or hands ever shook or body ever shivered Remember me if the day turned night and there was no light to make the shadow appear Remember me for all the long days we spent far away and burned notes of lovers steam Remember me if you ever got lost and nothing lead the path but a spectrum of my past Remember me when the room split in half's and curtains roll around and gohsts come around Remember me if the clock struk once and the time was done like nothing ever begun Remember me if my life fade away, and no one decided to stay on my grave with respect to pay Remember me if my word ever knocked the doors of your house and sneaked through the window to find nothing alike!!? Remember me if time ever stopped and my soul was dropped before you as a broken glass Remember me when the weather gets cold, when the sun never rise and it rains so hard Remember me if you felt what I felt and drowned with regreat for a life apart spent Remember me as an angel of night who failed to protect your heart from the judgement of a crule knight

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Date: 2/18/2016 11:14:00 AM
ALI, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/5/2015 7:42:00 PM
Ali A, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 8/4/2015 2:03:00 PM
Hi Ali,could you please explain the poem to me?? chose it for a assignment but i don't fully understand it
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Ali Adhab
Date: 8/5/2015 7:48:00 PM
Sure thing, it'd b my pleasure
Date: 6/26/2015 3:02:00 AM
I like the repetition. A deep write. I enjoyed.
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Ali Adhab
Date: 6/26/2015 3:03:00 AM
Thank you,, I hope you enjoyed reading it

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