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OBLIVION Your head is dead a chamber vast and void and nothing's what you think on anymore forgotten are all things you once enjoyed and are replaced by life; the constant bore your brain's been drained you sit alone and stare all hope's run out, your heart is solid stone from night to day and day to night it's there the wish to be forgotten and alone. You think and sink into oblivion not caring if you fade into the sky, once innocent, your life's become your sin and no one knows where you have gone to die. Hallucinating for one friend who'll stay, You see a face, then watch it fade away. © Vee Bdosa the Doylestown Poet aka Ron Wilson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/4/2016 9:41:00 PM
This poem merits being read more than once. Each time you read it you find a new layer to pull back and explore. There's nothing superficial about this poem. Very well written.
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