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Oblivion

Your lovely name will sink into oblivion Your pretty face will lose its charm And all your moves and gestures that were accurate Would be uncomfident and clumsy You were the reason of human death They sold their souls for hearing your voice You were a siren, who took their last breath You were the greatest creature of Nyx People compared your body to the art They tagged along without a word They called you Seducer, Sweetheart, the God But no one could see your wrenched wings

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Kishan Sharma

Date: 6/3/2018 11:26:00 AM

Nice one

Alisa Balaieva
Date: 6/3/2018 2:17:00 PM

Great thanks <3

James Swartz

Date: 6/3/2018 6:02:00 AM

Very deep Alisa. You put a lot of emotion into this and your point is felt all the way through. I do wonder if this is about a specific person?

Alisa Balaieva
Date: 6/3/2018 10:37:00 AM

Hi James. It's nice to hear from you. Well, I can't say that this poem is about a specific person, but I thought about 3 people during my writing. I always was inspired by some people(in most cases, it was celebs). I just tried to imagine what would happen if they fade and lose their former glory and power. How unfair some fans are. They want every piece of person forgetting about their own desires and lives.