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A feckless mist came out of nowhere, to blur the fresco of my dream, and frayed the edges of my sorrow, with no regard for where I've been. How often have I searched the night, to hear the voice that calls to me, to trace the outline of a smile, or once again recall the face, if only for a little while... Yet, somehow the mist eclipsed my dream, and schemed to take it all from me
___________________________________ For "Through The Mist" contest, sponsored by Nette Onclaud By Carrie Richards 8/21/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/13/2014 7:29:00 PM
Love, this. Powerful imagery for me.
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Date: 8/31/2014 10:50:00 PM
such a compelling write with artwords that make me throb, carrie.. thank you for gracing my contest and congrats!
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:26:00 PM
Carrie this is simply stunning many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/24/2014 2:45:00 PM
Amazing :) :)
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Date: 8/23/2014 8:00:00 AM
For me I have vivid dreams that somehow vanish into the mist as soon as I awake. My wife remembers her dreams in great detail.
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Date: 8/22/2014 6:14:00 AM
Bravo for the Soup's free verse master. I doubt any entry could top this. I feel relieved when the mist "eclipses my dream" as nightmares are a problem for me. It is always a blessing, though, to see the faces of lost loved ones in dreams. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/21/2014 6:13:00 PM
Outstanding, Carrie.
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