Obl

Years of tyranny Shot down in a solid blast Freedom reigns again

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2011 9:56:00 PM

btw, matt, I just noticed I had not faved you yet. what was i thinking? One of my coolest poet friends! So glad you are at Soup.

Matt Hunt
Date: 6/11/2011 10:17:00 PM

Man, that would be an honor to be one of your fav poets. That would just make my day:D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2011 11:45:00 PM

ok, so THIS is OBL. I just had to know what those initials were!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/3/2011 1:40:00 PM

yes, at last, a at easement is kicking in for the country, enjoyed your senryu, take care,...p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/2/2011 2:28:00 PM

Nice expressions with apt images on freedom, R.m.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/2/2011 1:42:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today R.M. I will be back again soon to read more. Have a wonderful week filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol

James Foulk

Date: 5/2/2011 10:28:00 AM

a very beautfiul piece. thank you for reading and commenting on Small Town Boy. I lived in small towns until i was 13 on and off, but someday want to move back to small town. my wife grew up on a farm, and my day was a farmer, so it must be really nice for you to live in the country.

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/2/2011 5:16:00 AM

Amen! Nice one.