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The stumble blocks, the parts and pieces An exchange is met and cold conversation clings Heavy as an ant under solar demise, a magnifying glass Casual tumble-down into irrelevent, replaceable poses It amounts to silence trapped within frames Broken glass and bric-a-brac

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/23/2009 7:11:00 PM
intense free-verse! Nathaniel, another strong write! thanks for comments, a VFW (Veterans of Foreign Wars) is a drinking club with membership reserved for US Veterans.... we have such establishments all over my city, as America seems to always be fighting somewhere, with thousands of Veterans constantly returning from war....
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Date: 7/23/2009 9:02:00 AM
I love this... every line is just packed with beautiful images. "Heavy as an ant under solar demise" is my favorite. KCOG Ladybug. =] Daffodil
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Date: 7/22/2009 7:40:00 PM
i like this one. check out some of my poems
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