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She walked in sunlight upon the air. new buds became blossoms in her path. Her kindness she scattered everywhere, on her constant pain, she spent her wrath. My dear friend, Suzanne, last Sunday left to join other angels, share her glee. Ambassador, perhaps, to the cleft that divides skies from mountains and sea. Sisters, we thought, in a distant life. Our lives today were mirrors of each. Yet her's included terrible strife of pain, it seemed that nothing could breach. Goodbye, my dear friend, no longer cost, you can fly, you are forever free! Earth doesn't yet know what it has lost: one in a million you proved to be! March 25, 2023 for "Word Challenge--O Words" contest by Constance La France howmanysyllables.com=9

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Date: 3/27/2023 10:46:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Ann :) - hugs
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Date: 3/26/2023 8:13:00 PM
Heartfelt obituary to your dear friend Suzanne ! Quite touching. Congratulations Ann.
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Date: 3/26/2023 1:28:00 PM
Great obit and tribute to your friend Ann. Sweetly uplifting. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/26/2023 12:56:00 PM
Ann, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'O' Words with your emotional poem, blessings, Constance
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/26/2023 8:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance.
Date: 3/26/2023 5:16:00 AM
My heartfelt condolences on your loss, Ann, a great poem for her..
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/26/2023 11:14:00 AM
Thank you for your kindness, Joanna.
Date: 3/25/2023 6:42:00 PM
Ann, this is a great eulogy to your friend.  I'm sorry to hear you've lost a friend. Good luck in the contest.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/26/2023 11:13:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 3/25/2023 1:16:00 PM
sorry for your loss, ann. this is a wonderful tribute to your friend...
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/25/2023 3:55:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene. She was a big part of my life.
Date: 3/25/2023 1:08:00 PM
- Lovely written ... sad to lose a friend, Ann - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/26/2023 4:59:00 PM
Thanks for your nice comments, Sunshine. I'm actually happy for her. :)

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