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Oasis

Opelescent sky casting a pink glow As I walk slowly through the hourglass of time Somewhere in the middle of nowhere I find your footprints on the sand Spring water flows across the desert of my heart Inspired by andrea deitrich's five word acrostic contest Not for contest but andrea tnks for the inspiration Reposted cause I mistakely erased my previous acrostic Tnks for all who commented in my previous post

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Tim Smith

Date: 2/22/2016 10:45:00 AM

Oh how lovely it is to find a gem hidden in your writes. So glad I have come across this poem. I await the spring water to flow as I walk this desert alone. A peach Charma : )

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/30/2014 7:43:00 PM

Oh I love your oasis! Cool acrostic :)

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/17/2014 7:40:00 PM

Crafty, witty.... ' Spring water flows across the desert of my heart... ' wink/wink Charmaine! Good stuff

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/12/2014 1:19:00 PM

The Acrostic is my favorite form. By reading this gem I have the inspiration to post one like, yesterday!:-) Thank you for that, this was eye candy!!Asavvy1

Michael Dom

Date: 1/22/2014 3:24:00 AM

wow, I like the image, very.

James Fraser

Date: 11/4/2013 4:56:00 PM

I'm glad I clicked on this one Charmaine. It's an absolute delight to read. An Oasis is something in life, as are you. It's a pleasure to add this to my favs's, I love it. James :) xx

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/20/2013 6:33:00 AM

Wow, this is a stunning acrostic Charma, now I also understand Andrea's comment.. This would have done really well in her contest :) you made me smile today with this beauty! *hugs*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2013 5:44:00 PM

I don't know why you didn't enter this one. It would have been like a number one or two tied with others in my contest!!! geeez, Charma. It's fantastic.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/17/2013 5:09:00 PM

Very pretty piece!

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/15/2013 3:00:00 PM

Lovely work Charmaine. Thanks for your kind review on Winds Of The Night. Love and Light.

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/15/2013 10:23:00 AM

Good Day Pretty Lady! This is so so sweet... loved every line! Hope your Sunday is a happy day! Hugs, Jack xoxox

Chris Boskovski

Date: 9/14/2013 4:28:00 PM

Charma... simply beautiful and glorious. I bow to you with honour!!! Charma such a beautiful poem! Great write! xoxoxo love from your friend Christopher :)