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What is different though seems not much change. I explored the eclipse sitting in my living space, shades partially open. My hubby continued to work. This means he will finish and we can go out to dinner. I did not get any glasses to view the eclipse as I was too busy preparing for my trip. I saw a previous one so no biggie! Hugs-a-million ~ Kim

I didn’t notice much change, but now the birds begin to sing…the music breaks through…it is okay once more. The ancients must have thought so. I wonder of the animals in the zoo, the scientists rubbing their palms. I noticed when it seemed a minor dim, hardly noticeable. Didn’t have glasses to join the din, so opened the shades. Now, seems a bit brighter. Hoping the world sees it the same. A bit brighter, a hopeful tomorrow. O Luna! O Soleil! Slay me…but save my eyes. The night and day meet, out in the open they meet, and the worshippers gather, but I hold out for the Creator, my hands as if holding an infant, arise. It is sunrise, yet not. It was sunset, but not. Sooner comes the Lord, ready or not…

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Date: 4/8/2024 8:48:00 PM
Thank you for giving the Creator His due, Kim. ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/9/2024 4:24:00 AM
Always and Amen!
Date: 4/8/2024 4:52:00 PM
a fabulous and timely poem, Kim. I especially liked these words: hold out for the Creator, my hands as if holding an infant, arise. I appreciate how you brought spirituality and faith into your words. Wishing you a wonderful evening, hugs & blessings, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/8/2024 5:00:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! I always appreciate you!
Date: 4/8/2024 2:49:00 PM
beautiful poem, birds are witnesses , here it was too cloudy, don't seen anything thanks for the gracious poem Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/8/2024 5:01:00 PM
I appreciate you, my friend! :)
Date: 4/8/2024 2:31:00 PM
Beautiful birdsong, accompanied by a great poem...Kim. Unfortunately, you missed out on seeing it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/8/2024 5:02:00 PM
I did! It didn’t get too dark here. Yesterday came back from vacation so my mind wasn’t on it. Bless you, dear friend!
Date: 4/8/2024 1:23:00 PM
- It was a shame you didn't get to see it... a bonus...you got beautiful birdsong :) - A lovely poem, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/8/2024 5:03:00 PM
I will take the birdsong…so lovely! Thank you, Anne-Lise!

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