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Nuts To You - For Contest

Nuts To You The squirrel hunts his nuts with great abandon then buries them in sequences quite random. no time to check the value of each prize he’s not the only hunter beneath the trees he knows the raccoons see just what he sees yet buries them beneath their prying eyes knowing that by half they’re empty lies deception hid beneath the coming freeze a cool soft sun fades beneath a dark horizon hard winds rock shivering trees nested hammock swings rocking nestled family warmth beneath fluffy grey quilt. 10/5/2016 one couplet one rhyming stanza, ABBAAB one Sedoka, 577577

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Date: 10/23/2016 2:54:00 AM
Dear John, congratulations on your great win! ! lovely squirrel..and fun in this poem!//love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/22/2016 10:14:00 PM
Very good, John, congratulations on your win :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/22/2016 11:03:00 AM
how sweet was this, because I love the squirrels! I know my mom doesn't like them because they tear up her lawn lol, but I adore them, very lovely poem :)congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :) -luloo
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Date: 10/11/2016 1:35:00 AM
Well penned. Good luck
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