Number Ten

Number ten... Gold Finches... Try to drink...

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Audrey Haick

Date: 2/23/2013 10:58:00 PM

Spring is on its way, hooray! Thanks for sharing this vivid picture,Sara! Love, Annalise

Jack Horne

Date: 2/23/2013 1:05:00 PM

lol, had a chuckle imagining this scene

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/21/2013 1:54:00 PM

You've described those finches in the tightest of pinches, here Sara." L O L)) well done and good to read.!

Len Gasun

Date: 2/21/2013 11:22:00 AM

This is an awesome write my dear friend Sara. I enjoyed reading it with a refreshing feeling. Number ten is my favourite. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great day and God bless you always! love and big hugs, Leonora

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/20/2013 6:41:00 PM

I can picture this spring beauty!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/20/2013 3:21:00 PM

Sara, you are a very kind and steadfast person. I appreciate it very much.

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/20/2013 7:13:00 AM

This is a fantastic and wondrous write my friend! This is an extension of your previous poem is it not? Quite the special write Sara, I loved reading it this morning! What a masterful piece, Great Work!!