Number 10

"That's been tampered with, quite obviously too." "But it's all I've got mate, until the next one comes through." It's a bit of a joke, cruel as well. I'm taking my one pound ten straight down to ell'. S**t I've passed my stop, quickly press the bell. Hey Fred, if there's free bus fares down there, do tell.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/12/2015 12:19:00 AM

Josh, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 8/11/2015 4:53:00 PM

Josh, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT