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Numb

I stare at my page, With no ideas in mind, The words start to flow, As my pencil sits in this bind, The thoughts come and they go, It’s been so long since i felt this low, The venom now runs in my veins, Unheard and very much unseen, But as for myself, where do I go? Yeah I feel lost but this isn’t hell, So go ahead and try to hurt me, I probably wouldn’t be able to tell, ...I’m numb,

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Date: 9/14/2014 6:55:00 PM
Hi Trent, what a deep powerful write this is! Bravo! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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Date: 9/14/2014 8:34:00 AM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Trent - I choose your first great written poem - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/12/2014 2:07:00 PM
Trent,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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