Nude Study

Her body, rounded curves perfectly toned, sudden surging peaks with pink rose tipped pleasure ~~over a small soft valley,~~ then downward plunge near her waistline, far below Grand Canyon is waiting, a perfect sculpture created by God. © kashinath karmakar ===============000================ Placement: 3rd (Feb. 2012) By:kash poet Contest:Poetic Art Sponsor:Linda-Marie

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Kim Merryman

Date: 3/10/2012 12:46:00 PM

A wonderful, descriptive etheree, Kash. Well done. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/8/2012 7:29:00 AM

You razzled us again with this intoxicating poem! Congrats, Kash!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/7/2012 9:25:00 PM

congrats Kash on an exciting win luv.. I simply adore this piece from u ..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/7/2012 11:01:00 AM

Good afternoon and congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "3rd place wins Only" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 3/7/2012 10:21:00 AM

congrats on the win Kash....hapy holi.......~sashi

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/7/2012 10:12:00 AM

KASH,,,.Congratulations! THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2012 6:08:00 PM

that cat really did sit on my head and I loved it!! She would come to me in the morning and hit my face with her little paws so that I'd get up and feed her. She died five years ago and I got my two cats I have now (they will never measure up to my LADY)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2012 6:07:00 PM

hey, another belated congrats for you today!! I was here since 3 and now it's 6, so off I go!!! Need to work on some contest poems and just chillax!! Do you like my new word for you: Chillaxing. Chill out = relax(same meaning and you just combine them into one word). bye now, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 2/19/2012 9:17:00 AM

Many congratulations on your fine win Kash. The Grand Canyon sure is a sight of beauty. Have a wonderful Sunday :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/16/2012 5:20:00 AM

Congratulations Kash stunningly Beautiful xx

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/16/2012 4:52:00 AM

See Kash? I was right!! Congratulations on your win in the contest :) Wilma

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/15/2012 11:55:00 PM

Congrats on your well deserved win! Blessings, Rhonda

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/15/2012 4:58:00 PM

Kash, this is a beautifully written Etheree. Congrats on your 3rd place win in Linda-Marie's contest...................S.Ronthorpe

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/15/2012 11:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Linda Marie's "Poetic Art" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi

Date: 2/15/2012 10:00:00 AM

Congratulations Kash!!! I knew it, this is a winner!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/15/2012 9:45:00 AM

congrats Kash on third place win for this exciting and expressive entry luv.. thankxxx..

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/13/2012 5:30:00 AM

How did I miss this one Kash??? Woo hoo, now you got me smiling to myself.. you are sure going to place with this one I am sure :) thanks for the smiles today!! back to work for me hehe

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/12/2012 2:42:00 PM

BUT KASH,...Politics IS a form of ROMANTICISM...didn't you follow the rise and fall of the Bill Clinton Presidency...I promise to throw a contest that has NOTHING at all to do with politics in the very near future...I might just have to surprise you..Thanks for writing this poem about me,,,,really,...it's just perfect. ha haha. I am running on fumes and caffeine today. Hope your son is doing great during exams..Gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/11/2012 1:26:00 PM

Very explicit work..Good luck in the contest..I checked the syllable count and I get only 9 syllables in my first line..On which word do you think that I miscounted..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Dinda Minardi

Date: 2/11/2012 10:34:00 AM

No more to say, this is awesome. Just awesome. You present sexiness in poetic art.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2012 11:35:00 PM

It's great to do that, use a familiar theme and change it almost completely. YOu have a real winner here, Kash.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2012 6:02:00 PM

Kash, this is wonderful. Is it the same one from before. It looks very familiar to the other one i liked so much. Linda will LOVE love love it.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/10/2012 12:02:00 PM

stunning and refreshigly sensual, kashi... ohh, the curves!... winning huggs!.. come visit...:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/10/2012 11:47:00 AM

- X- celen write kash!!! oxox love Anne-Lise

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/10/2012 10:24:00 AM

wonderful and a very sensuous poem, Linda should love this. i do. harry