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NP Seranades Parked up in the car one night We pulled over full of love Lying in the back seat of the car Holding and whispering words of love A tune came on the radio I decided to sing along My husband then sat up and said, “Lets go” so I wondered what I’d done wrong. I drove us towards our home Singing love songs as I drove He said “would you stop your singing dear” As we left our loving grove. I am serenading my love for you, my sweet darling, And I reached to grasp his hand I know my love but the noise is killing me I hope you’ll understand. If the environmental people stop us and they hear you sing They will put a stop and fine you with, A noise pollution thing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/6/2012 11:55:00 AM
Dear Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations on your Win in Susan's contest. Being a Faithful Christian I joined the Church choir I was classed as a baritone but they heard me sing and put me between a master Bass and a superb Tenor I'm still in the choir but I only lip sing LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 12/2/2012 2:58:00 PM
so funny, so you sing in the bath?
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/2/2012 4:30:00 PM
no sorry would love to sing xx
Date: 1/5/2012 6:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win if not your singing. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/5/2012 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Susan's~ "Offensive Odors or Noise Pollution" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2012 3:18:00 AM
Mandy congratulations on your win,Enjoyed your poem..
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Date: 12/12/2011 5:53:00 AM
I call myself the black hole of musical ability. I'm so bad that if you have tallent, you'll lose it if you get too close to me. I know what you are talking about here.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/12/2011 6:05:00 AM
We are more similar than I first thought x
Date: 12/12/2011 12:21:00 AM
* "HAHAHAHA * I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THIS CUTE, HUMOROUS & VERY LOVELY POEM * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL MANDY * TWAS KIND OF WONDERFULLY STRANGE BECAUSE I COULD ACTUALLY FEEL YOUR BEAUTIES SPIRIT TOUCHING MY OWN AS I READ THIS SERENADES MOMENT * KIND OF LIKE DEJA VU OR SOMETHING * I DON'T KNOW BUT ANYWAY * EXCELLENT AMID MANY LIGHTS * I BET YOUR TREASURES HAVE A QUITE BEAUTIFUL ALSO *.* TELL YOU HUBBY TO TRY & LIGHTEN UP * HAPPY HOLIDAYS * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/12/2011 2:36:00 AM
Sarah your messages are always a delight. Thank you so much, and I wish you all you wish yourself for now and forever. x

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