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Now They Reside In the Deep South

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her boobies had sagged two boulders in a hammock she is stony faced 03~08~15 Contest -Make me chuckle with a Haiku/Senyru#1 - PD

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James Fraser
Date: 3/10/2015 4:13:00 PM
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Haha, so funny Jan. Oh my, it's been an evening of laughs on the Soup, mainly down to your wit Jan. Wishing this funny poem all the best in the contest, hugs//James xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2015 4:16:00 PM
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I do try and write with humour whenever I can James - just hope PD likes my style:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/10/2015 9:15:00 AM
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Ha ha,snort chuckle chuckle!
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2015 11:38:00 AM
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Glad I made you smile Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/9/2015 4:37:00 PM
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good one. i hope she sees the picture!! I think I should name mine a senryu. But in any even , haiku are sometimes called same as senryu. I see you did a horse poem for Nette. I too chose the horse picture. I am seeing that the contests are all filling really fast and I am so mad because I am at school and have no way to get to my files and post poems for the contests almost closing.. Uggggg.
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2015 2:05:00 AM
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Thanks for dropping by hope you get to post your poems in time:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/9/2015 4:05:00 PM
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Too funny, Jan! Love it! Perfect for the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2015 2:05:00 AM
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thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Gary Dye
Date: 3/9/2015 9:46:00 AM
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however-she is still beautiful, as are your works
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/9/2015 9:55:00 AM
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Thanks Gary:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Bl Devnath
Date: 3/9/2015 9:24:00 AM
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A great senryu with a laughing humour beautifully done. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/9/2015 9:54:00 AM
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Thanks so much BL:-) hugs Jan xx
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/8/2015 7:32:00 PM
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lol Linda will love this Jan gl in contest 7 hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/9/2015 9:54:00 AM
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I hope so Shadow:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/8/2015 7:19:00 PM
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This is one of the most funny poems I've seen in just a few short verses, Jan! Hilarious!! :D
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/9/2015 9:53:00 AM
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Thanks Laura:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Shane Cooper
Date: 3/8/2015 4:51:00 PM
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great work! you got a chuckle out of me. I just do not know how you keep coming up with such fantastic humour. love Shane xxx
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Shane Cooper
Date: 3/8/2015 5:06:00 PM
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I have no idea where the word failed came from. You are brilliant.
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2015 5:02:00 PM
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Thanks Shane - think I am a failed comedienne at heart lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/8/2015 4:48:00 PM
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Deep humour Jan...lol...hugs Tim
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2015 5:01:00 PM
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Thanks Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Mama Bear
Date: 3/8/2015 12:01:00 PM
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Your concepts are always delightful Glad you still have your sense of the ridiculous intact. Wish I could think like you LOL Hugs Edith
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2015 12:08:00 PM
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Thanks Mama Bear:-) Just hope PD finds it funny:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Julia Ward
Date: 3/8/2015 11:14:00 AM
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You wondered if it were a senryu: it is. I like it a lot. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Julia, xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2015 11:35:00 AM
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Thanks Julia - we can pen either a senryu or a haiku and I thought it was ok:-) Hugs Jan xx

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