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Now Gone, I So Wish I Could Sing a Song

Now Gone, I So Wish I Could Sing A Song Why did he smile only by few inches His face contorted and it was askew By the garden was a flock of finches Old age, do we forget what we once knew His arms were skinny, not near as mighty His head kinda bald and his beard bright white He said his first wife was mad, too flighty When loving her body was quite a sight But he was my beloved dad and proud Often complained of failing eyesight And when he did that it was very loud Told me when you do something do it right. My dad, so tough, honest as day is long. Now gone, I so wish I could sing a song! Robert J. Lindley, 6-23-2023 Sonnet, My father was the most honest man I've ever known. And tough as nails too.

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Date: 7/13/2023 2:53:00 AM
A fine tribute to your loving dad, Robert. Belated congrats on POTD! Hope all is well ,my friend. Best wishes...Charlie
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/13/2023 5:12:00 AM
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Date: 6/26/2023 1:27:00 PM
Robert your father was a great dad. Love your words of him in this wonderful Poetry of yours. Just noticed you won POTD Congratulations my friend. Well deserved...
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:41:00 PM
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Date: 6/26/2023 5:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Robert, on POTD! Something about every nuance of a beloved parent, even if it was annoying at the time, it could be the most endearing. I love my dad’s smile, so elusive for neatly a year after Mom died. I remember the the thing that gave me, my sis and dad a good laugh. Oh how sweet that was. I know you miss him. Hugs, Robert ~ your friend, Kim
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:41:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 7:08:00 PM
Lovely write a wonderful tribute to your dad. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:47:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 5:50:00 PM
Dear Robert, it sounds like your father was an amazing man. As health declines, it will cause many issues physically and mentally. Unconditional love is tough, yet tender and delicate, all at the same time. This is such a beautiful tribute to your father. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you and yours. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:47:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 12:36:00 PM
- Lovely written for your beloved dad, Robert :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:47:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 11:43:00 AM
Loving tribute . I love the details that brought your father and his changes and behaviors to life for the reader ! Congratulations dear Robert on POTD. Hugs , Susan :)
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:46:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write/tribute. Have a blessed day/week.................
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:46:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 8:29:00 AM
Great tribute to your father, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:46:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 6:42:00 AM
May you father's memory be for a blessing, Robert. And may you know no more sorrow. ~ Gershon
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:46:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. I am ashamed I stopped following you but I always found your poems difficult for me to to understand. I am getting too old and senile. Yours is a fine tribute to a great man. Well done Robert with apologies.
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:45:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 6:07:00 AM
Lovely tribute to your father Robert. Congrats on POTD! :)
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:45:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your tribute poem of your father being chosen as the POTD, Robert. The image you painted was well done. Another of the sonnets I amire. As to singing a song, I sang "The Lord's Prayer to my mother on the last day of her life. At the end she joined in, 'thine is the kingdom, the power and the glory forever' and passed on to be with Him. Thanks for bringing that memory back to me again my dear friend. Enjoy this blessed day that we've been given. Bill
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:45:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 5:59:00 AM
Robert, congratulations on POTD, a nice tribute to your Dad.
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:45:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations, Robert, for such melancholy lines of your Sonnet being chosen as today's POTD.
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:44:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 5:40:00 AM
Great tribute, not enough tough fathers out there.
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:44:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 5:36:00 AM
Dear Robert, a great tribute to your father - brought memories of my father - tough and kind! Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:44:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 5:31:00 AM
Robert, great memories of your Father. I can tell that you were loved by him very much. Keep it close to you and eventually you will be able to sing his song. Wishing you comfort~ Warren
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:44:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 5:16:00 AM
Hi Robert, Lovely tribute to your father I'm sure he's looking down with a smile.
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:43:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 5:07:00 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Robert. Awesome tribute you wrote to honor your father's memories. Enjoy your special day today.
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:43:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 4:51:00 AM
Robert, congratulations on your POTD honors!!
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:43:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 4:40:00 AM
Some have a loving heart bneath their rough exterior ! Your Dad must have been one such person. You can be proud that you had such a dad. A beautiful remembrance of your father. Congratulatons on your POTD
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/27/2023 3:43:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 3:42:00 AM
The qualities of a good man Robert, honest and tough, I too was lucky to have a Father with such traits, A wonderful tribute beautifully written, I’m sure Pop’s would be proud, congratulations on POTD, cheers David
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:42:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 2:41:00 AM
What a beautiful tribute to your father Robert, congratulations on a well deserved honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:42:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2023 1:56:00 AM
A beautiful, heartfelt tribute to your Dad, Robert ~ may his soul rest in peace, in God’s domain of boundless love and light. Warmest congratulations on POTD
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:42:00 PM
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