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Now that you are gone this life is so empty remembering what could have been struggling with goodbye, as life goes on does it make me strong ... We were on the cliff your love was so pure heartache was falling, with our breath too shallow Came from ringlets of devotion Joining the old with the new....Dripping words my love, Pains of silence, drop around us Closed out, definitely alone The past you cannot see Crying pain....what else is there to be... Now my love, now that you are gone Now forever heartaches, torn apart Forevermore............. Now.... Brooke Dylan 2014

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Date: 6/20/2014 5:11:00 AM
Another sad poem written straight from the heart. Am going to check out some more of your work...
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Date: 5/20/2014 1:38:00 PM
Smile, You Crack Me Up, Baby Girl! But We Can Understand Somewhat Where Your Gifted Beauty's Words, Art Coming From Yet, I Am Not Quite Certain If Most Other's Can ? A True Poet; And As One Gazes About This World We Know Now..With Compassion's Loving And Understanding Heart, We, Blow Their Priceless Tears, `Sincerity's....Deepest Kiss....Love, Jeremy *
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/20/2014 1:40:00 PM
You are amazing Jeremy... simply amazing... hugs and kisses. love Brooke
Date: 5/13/2014 7:29:00 PM
It's very sad. I really liked that one line "Pains of silence drop around us"
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/13/2014 7:44:00 PM
Thank you Andrea.. hugs
Date: 5/13/2014 7:23:00 PM
Another brilliant write that could have came only from a life experience. A love embraced so deeply but fallen so completely. Sad.. One has to feel the pain when reading!!
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/13/2014 7:38:00 PM
Thank you so much robert I love your comment... hugs
Date: 5/13/2014 7:16:00 PM
This is so sad Brooke. My heart goes out to you,,,hugs Tim
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/13/2014 7:19:00 PM
Thank you Tim.. so good to see you.. hugs

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