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November Rain

the storm not over ~ a rainbow riddled with bullet holes

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Date: 12/17/2022 3:43:00 PM
Your words are genius! That is truth!
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Date: 12/13/2022 8:43:00 PM
Yeah. You've captured the bleakness of it all. You shoulda been a war correspondent. this is better than three columns on all the suffering. Keep 'em coming, Maureen. Blessings, Gershon
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/15/2022 7:12:00 AM
It seems it takes heart aches to muster my muse these days. One of my favourite artists, Alex Colville, was a war artist, I don’t know of an official war poet position, but I suppose it’s wars of all kinds that poets speak to. xomo
Date: 12/9/2022 3:22:00 AM
A wonderful image is in my head after reading this Maureen; like a Van Gogh... You're always a blessing Maureen. Thanks
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/12/2022 5:10:00 AM
Lol... Great reply Maureen
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/11/2022 6:39:00 PM
A one ear vs two noses, my money’s on the unibrow… ;),
Date: 11/29/2022 9:31:00 PM
Best one liner ever ! Leet!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/11/2022 6:37:00 PM
Merci beaucoup! My muse hadn’t budged in ages, a nightmare woke it up. xomo
Date: 11/29/2022 5:32:00 AM
Hi Maureen, I'm so pleased that you are writing again and have progressed so well with the brain situation. God Bless and please stay safe up there in the north.
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Date: 11/26/2022 11:20:00 AM
The paradox of our times, even with bullet holes we try to hope~
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/27/2022 2:15:00 PM
Amen love. xomo
Date: 11/22/2022 1:09:00 PM
well said, maureen!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/23/2022 5:29:00 AM
Thank you lovely! xomo
Date: 11/22/2022 11:02:00 AM
Like senior eyes trying to create the whole picture from from light unseen. Enjoyed!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 11/23/2022 10:23:00 AM
You are! Aloha!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/23/2022 5:29:00 AM
There is a crack in everything, that’s where the light gets in… I suppose I’m pretty bright for a cracker. ;p xomo!

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