November Dreams

NOVEMBER DREAMS Acrobatic leaves fatigued,drop to earth below. Calmly, they rest jampack-like. Trees beheaded bold while meteor-like streaks fall. They hug the trunks with cold-fire. © O. E. Guillermo 11:21PM, October 09, 2014 Sponsor Andrea Dietrich Contest Name OCTOBER BLISS or NOVEMBER DREAMS/ Sijo or Sedoka Placed 6th.. :) to God be the glory..

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/12/2014 7:03:00 PM

What a wonderful write Olive, Congratulations on your win.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/12/2014 7:23:00 PM

thank you Maurice.. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 5:40:00 AM

loved reading these a second time many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/12/2014 7:22:00 PM

thanks much sweet Jan.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/12/2014 5:22:00 AM

Nice November dreams, Olive, congrats on the win

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/12/2014 7:21:00 PM

thans much Dr. Ram.. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 12:47:00 AM

This one has some interesting imagery, Olive. Love the acrobatic leaves. I was trying to imagine what the meteor like streaks were. So intriguing. congrats in my contest.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/12/2014 7:17:00 PM

thanks much Andie.. :D!!! glad for the place.. ;)

James Fraser

Date: 10/11/2014 11:17:00 AM

From their bloom of life to skeletal, from their dancing sways, to acrobatic demise, the trees now cry. Another gem from you Olive, and your poetry gets better and better, stronger and stronger, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/12/2014 7:16:00 PM

thanks much MR. James... :) God bless us all