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November the lost souls have returned mumbling then roaring day and night around the windows and doors. perhaps they are jealous of the warmth that melts them into puddles of discontent across the threshold. clouds streak the skies like ancient winding sheets grey and feathered about their edges threatening to smother any cheer that crosses through the pre-winter chill. yet far into the dusk, red appears like a distant beacon, a ray of hope. the fray-fingered trees lose their frightening qualities as they turn toward the horizon. the wolves howl becomes a carol owls murmurs soften, into streams of angel wings passing in the almost night. snow begins, at first tentative single flakes then bundles and wafts cover the raw land soften, sanctify swell upon the nakedness. all that is harm backs away, slinks into crevices before the lady's coming, before the Christmas spirit.

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Date: 11/29/2017 5:40:00 PM
Hello Patricia I enjoyed your poetry. My favourite verses are the last verse and the 1st. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 11/17/2017 7:57:00 AM
you really know how to create vivid imagery in your creative poem... well written..
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/20/2017 9:44:00 AM
That is because I want you there beside me sharing/living the experience. Silent One you are the best!
Date: 11/17/2017 6:34:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in this poem--so well written!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/20/2017 9:46:00 AM
Thank you Vijay.
Date: 11/17/2017 3:59:00 AM
Ah, yes, the imagery of snow falling, so beautiful my friend! I just love it when it's snowing outside, as long as it doesn't impede my driving I'm fine with it! I love it when it's colder outside, and that usually brings with it snow! There usually is a calm that comes from a tender snowfall...even the owls know its grandiose! I really loved your wondrous poem here this morning Patricia! You have delighted me by your harmonious piece of tranquility, Great Work!!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/20/2017 9:50:00 AM
Russell you are as I have long expected an old softie when it comes to Christmas and natures preparations for the season. Thank you for seeing it with wonder.
Date: 11/16/2017 6:45:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Patricia.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/20/2017 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Line.
Date: 11/16/2017 6:24:00 PM
Lovely writing, as usual, and sooo descriptive. I've never lived where snow came early, but wind - oh, the wind!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/20/2017 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Sunny One stay warm.

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