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November

november is nearing its end the trees seem starved of life standing bare in frigid air i shiver at the thought of winter’s touch it’s much like a kiss upon someone gone too soon from life i look around me and see death as it stands before me yet i feel full on thoughts that taunt my mind i am numb tired and weak don’t care to speak in a breath that rises from lips in frigid air when i see no breath from my mother, brother, father gone too soon from life i want to see life again or feel their kisses in a summer’s breeze yet all i see is death among the trees i feel it in the air i still taste it it’s everywhere i snap like branches beneath a storm spiral down become grounded again...again... in november’s end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/19/2012 8:28:00 PM
You transported me! Very rarely happens, but your words struck a chord with me, very personal and deep. Thank you for making me feel tonight with this awesome piece! The holiday season always makes me miss my passed loved ones so. Love your talent! Keep the pen handy, Andrea
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/19/2012 8:50:00 PM
thank you Andrea... this time of year is hard for me as well..the holidays is for family, and mine is becoming smaller all the time...I am honored to have touched you with my words....writing is our therapy...hope to read more of yours soon!

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