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Nothing Lasts Forever

“And when your fears subside and shadows still remain” Dark places floating in rear view mirror journeys on empty highways, slick and cold but in the past Within my hand I hold you, warmth finds the place, leaving behind the sorrow on leaf covered shoulders “I know that you can love me when there's no one left to blame” Taken upon my soul, those incisions of pain, deep Draped on heavy sighs and forward motions Cast aside, tossed for loss, rendered useless and my heart sings for you, come to me for I shall love you “So never mind the darkness we still can find a way” Shrouded in worry, clouded escapes stood firmly Together we can draw back these curtains, embroidered blankets, revealing the next hillside spilling a sunrise in bright smiles and good memories rejoicing “'Cause nothin' lasts forever, even cold November rain”
***Italicized lines are lyrics from Guns n Roses "November Rain" This was inspired by Christy Stover's poem "I can't hear you"

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Date: 11/15/2016 7:07:00 PM
I can't believe I missed this one. Beautiful eloquent poem, Chris. It's deep and passionate with beautifully flowing imagery. Thank you for the shout out at the end. I always wanted to be under Axl Rose and now I am! lol
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Chris Green
Date: 11/16/2016 11:00:00 AM
Umm, no comment on that last line. :) Thanks so much Christy, it's always a good day when Guns n Roses are in play.
Date: 11/12/2016 9:50:00 AM
Pure elegance, Chris. Your poetry is very visually fluid. It moves, it dances, it flows w/the rhythm of life. A masterfully written poem. Most excellent. Love and peace to you.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 9:04:00 AM
Thanks so much Freddie for your nice comments.
Date: 11/11/2016 11:22:00 PM
Awesome poem, as usual, Chris! Love your work bro. And by the way, the word is Lunatic. Haha
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Rick, yep, I thought it might be. :)
Date: 11/11/2016 5:03:00 PM
I know that song by Guns n Roses..Thanks God November rain wont last forever...'Spilling a sunrise in bright smiles and rejoicing memories...May the spilled sunrise cast its spell of warmth and light for good...Lovely.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/11/2016 5:09:00 PM
I'm with you on that, bring on the spring. :) Thank you Charmaine for your kind thoughts tonight.

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