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Nothing In Particular

The sun awakes him Without worry or shame Wish I could say I smell the roses That my life is just the same But he carries on Enriched by nothing at no cost I never had him in the first place So how can I claim to have lost His endless games make me alert He's nothing in particular to achieve I crash out amidst his callousness I've really nothing up my sleeve My silence is golden My armour suited up to boot There's nothing in particular I want to say My distance now absolute

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Michael Tor

Date: 7/28/2022 8:25:00 PM

This reminds me Jo of the old saying, "It's not the things that you say that are important, it's the things you don't say." Nicely written Jo..

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/14/2022 12:59:00 PM

Good pen Jo, well constructed with nice rhyme and flow too. Hope it's been good with you keeping cool in the heat. Gordon

Jo Hayton
Date: 7/14/2022 1:20:00 PM

Thankyou for lovely comments Gordon, was quick poem I wrote last night, just liked the 'Nothing in particular ' line so worked round it. It's not been too hot here but weekend will tell.