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Nothing Fancy - Collaboration With Chris Green

I wound her around my pinky She wrapped her heart in cellophane and gave it me for my birthday I gave her myself in rough paper Nothing fancy, just the pieces she seemed to like no bows, no card and she accepted it excitedly as if she somehow knew it wasn’t me I painted her a cup and saucer she filled it to the brim with smiles she added ample milk and sugar to my canvas, white pure delight As we sipped on memories, not those of the past, but coming where a blank canvas waited anticipating brush strokes, colorfully expressed *** September 10, 2017 Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White

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Date: 9/13/2017 10:59:00 AM
Very cozy and intimate, perhaps old lovers reuniting.
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Darren White
Date: 9/14/2017 1:44:00 AM
Who knows :)
Date: 9/12/2017 6:06:00 PM
What a beautiful collaboration! I love the metaphors and the fact that your styles of poetry mesh so beautifully together. Lovely! : )
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Darren White
Date: 9/14/2017 1:44:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie :)
Date: 9/11/2017 4:34:00 AM
Love your collaboration as always Darren and Chris. Looking forward to the blank canvas being painted too....Maria
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Darren White
Date: 9/14/2017 1:43:00 AM
So do I, Maria :)
Date: 9/10/2017 11:33:00 PM
:D Lovely and fun! A wonderful poem - I look forward to your collaborations <3
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Darren White
Date: 9/14/2017 1:42:00 AM
Yeah, love collaborating with Chris :)
Date: 9/10/2017 1:07:00 PM
- Maybe not fancy ... but lovely, Darren & Chris - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Darren White
Date: 9/14/2017 1:41:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/10/2017 9:59:00 AM
Magical mischief makers you two. This is delightful.
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Darren White
Date: 9/10/2017 12:18:00 PM
Thank you, Jean :)
Date: 9/10/2017 9:35:00 AM
Delightful pen my friends, tickles me deeply xomo x2
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Darren White
Date: 9/10/2017 12:17:00 PM
Thank you ma mo :)

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