Nothing But a Mass

The kings and the queens only divides us we masses are nothing but a giant mass ! the world is perfect by gods we respect as we write our disdained omnibus. (08.01.2022)

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/9/2022 2:03:00 AM

To the world we might not mean anything but usually in life to at least one person we mean the world. Praise God! He sees us individually and calls us by name. I enjoyed reading your work. It made me think. I appreciate the kind review you took time to write. Sara

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/9/2022 2:15:00 AM

I respect your view! Not deniable at all. this the political world i am talking about mostly. and a little grievance to HIM, is this YOUR perfect world of inequalities, LORD? Grateful for your thoughts in my poem page. Thanks - Marshall

Valsa George

Date: 1/7/2022 11:08:00 PM

While the majority is counted as a mass, a few stand out... ! 'Though all are equal, some are more equal' as George Orwell says ! Great limerick, dear friend !

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/7/2022 11:11:00 PM

Thank you very much Valsa! Really appreciate your input! you are a wise poet. - Marshall.

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/7/2022 7:22:00 PM

Each takes his/her mass-cut. Feels that way. Well, everyone that publishes here is important to me, an individual to be admired. Never just a number nor taken for granted. Oh would the kings and queens so believe! Unique limerick. I like it. Joe.

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/7/2022 9:20:00 PM

Unique limerick, my heart leaped with joy, Joe!!! really appreciate for realizing what i tried to say here. Not perfect in terms of syllable rhythm in the last three lines, but this is best I could do. Warm handshake for the encouragement. Thanks - Marshall

Judy Ball

Date: 1/7/2022 3:41:00 PM

The kings and queens need us masses. If not for us who would they be king and queen of? Nicely put. God Bless, JB

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/7/2022 4:12:00 PM

By the Gods powers are granted to them and then they take us for granted!! this is the perfect world!? Your nice comment is inspiration for me. Thank you very much. - Marshall