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Notes of Life

"In my fragile little ship, I sail, sail In the tempestuous sea of life Dodging life's pressures, to doldrums outlast"~ by poet Breathing in and out the notes of life, from first cry to last sigh, you sing you sing.... unbeknownst unbeknownst to you as to what tunes and notes of life you will be singing.. but you keep singing... taking cues taking cues from the rhythm of the twirl of time. As you warble to the ticking of time sometimes... a melody is created and the moment becomes lovely - when your hum is harmonious to the rhythm, tempo, and dynamics of life. Listening to that melody - so sweet, buds of love and peace bloom straightaway in vibrant colours to savour and celebrate the beautiful moment: a moment as beautiful as the sweet smile of a child and as peaceful as the stillness of a meditation hall. At times, your voice cracks you sing outside the range hitting the wrong note... and.........oh........ you slip down the stairs the last step extending down to the hassles and hard times of life... like a banana peel in an already slippery road, like a dust in the eye that blurs your vision, like that of a Wordle game that leaves you totally clueless. Such wrong notes in your song of life leave you in dismay like a torn page in a book: you get dejected, dispirited, and disheartened and a confused state of mind follows. But you know you should not stop you need to ignore the wrong note you struck not a wince, blink or a pause.. you have to just move on and on... and get your mojo back to continue carolling the rest of your notes of life in accordance to the rhythm of time... Date: 02/24/2022 'F' form - Free verse - New - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Theme Chosen: Life First Place Poem Of The Day on 02/24/2022

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Date: 3/25/2022 12:52:00 PM
Hello, dear. I think I have seen all you poems. My second movie is starting. I got caught up with half my comments between shows. See ya!!
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Date: 3/24/2022 4:00:00 PM
Dearest Ani, I am touched by the golden spill of your beautiful pen. The depth and breadth of your notes of life is profound, enlightening and inspiring. Every expressive line captives both my heart and imagination. I love both your quote and your poem. Belated congratulations for your well-deserved contest win and POTD honors! Warmest wishes and hugs, my sweet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/18/2022 6:10:00 PM
Congratulations, Anitha. A deep and profound reflection on life - to me, free verse is the best vehicle of such inspiring thoughts. Love and blessings ~ Mala
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Date: 3/4/2022 7:01:00 PM
Congrats Ani on your top win....I loved the poem:) much love.
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Date: 2/28/2022 2:59:00 PM
belated congrats to you, sweetie pie!!
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Date: 2/28/2022 8:24:00 AM
I am late to congratulate you as I was out of station for some time. Such a great and beautiful work. You always create masterpieces. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/26/2022 8:57:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend............
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Date: 2/27/2022 2:24:00 AM
Paula, thank you so very much for the return visit and the congrats...Hugs...~ Ani
Date: 2/26/2022 5:12:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your Winning entry in the contest! Fabulous! :)Paulette
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Date: 2/27/2022 2:23:00 AM
Paulette, thank you so very much for the return visit and the congrats...Hugs...~ Ani
Date: 2/26/2022 3:39:00 AM
Excellent poem Anitha......And a big congrats for winning POTD....much love :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/27/2022 2:22:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Carol for the visit, comment, and the congrats...Hugs...~ Ani
Date: 2/26/2022 2:23:00 AM
Missed seeing this as POTD! Back once again to congratulate you on this much deserved honor... Ani
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/27/2022 2:21:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear sweet Valsa for the return visit, and the congrats...Much appreciate...Hugs...~ Ani
Date: 2/25/2022 6:27:00 PM
Deep musings here, Anitha! Congrats on POTD!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/27/2022 2:15:00 AM
Thank you so very much Seeker for the visit, comment and the congrats...Much appreciate...God bless...~ Ani
Date: 2/25/2022 6:11:00 PM
*from first cry to last sigh* This thought touches my heart so deeply. "Life" is certain and unpredictable, all at the same time. Such is how it goes. You are right, we must (move on and on). This is beautiful in every way, and your thoughts caress softly around me. Congratulations Anitha, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/27/2022 2:14:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear sweet Brandy for your visit, kind words of appreciation of my poem, and the congrats. Much appreciate...Hugs...~ Ani
Date: 2/25/2022 5:04:00 PM
This poem is a creative masterpiece Anitha! “a moment as beautiful as the sweet smile of a child and as peaceful as the stillness of a meditation hall.” This is a beautiful way to view life. Congratulations on your win in the contest and Big Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/27/2022 2:09:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Connie for your visit, kind words of appreciation of my poem, and the congrats...Much appreciate...Hugs...~ Ani
Date: 2/25/2022 3:07:00 PM
Anitha, how perfectly beautiful, you reached the notes of height and depth in your song of life. Congratulations on Poem of the Day, it is a well deserved honor of your beautiful pen! Have a blessed day as you rejoice in this happy day, celebrating your POTD! <3 ~BJ
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/27/2022 2:06:00 AM
Thank you so very much BJ Legros for your visit, kind words of appreciation of my poem, and the congrats...Have a blessed day...~ Ani
Date: 2/25/2022 2:50:00 PM
Hi Anitha, I'm just coming to say congratulations on your top win. It was most definitely well deserved-Alexis
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/27/2022 2:01:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Alexis for the return visit and the congrats...Hugs...~ Ani
Date: 2/25/2022 2:47:00 PM
I see why you were picked for POTD! Congratulations, Anitha!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/27/2022 2:00:00 AM
Thank you so very much Kim for the visit, kind words and the congrats...Hugs...~ Ani
Date: 2/25/2022 2:27:00 PM
Ani, congratulations on your First Place win in my Free Verse contest with your amazing and beautiful poem, and I love your quote, plus congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ Constance
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/26/2022 12:15:00 AM
Dear Constance, thank you so very much for giving us the inspiration through your contests, to write better and better. Thank you again for your kind words of appreciation of my poem, and for the congrats. Am happy you liked my quote too, sweet friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 2/25/2022 2:27:00 PM
Back to Congratulate you on a well-deserved POTD! Enjoy your day at the top. Hugs ~ Debra
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Date: 2/27/2022 1:44:00 AM
Thank you so very much Debra for the return visit and the congrats... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 2/25/2022 10:55:00 AM
Engaging enchanting and insightful. Beautifully written. Congrats on the potd.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/26/2022 12:04:00 AM
Thank you so very much Karen for the visit, kind words and the congrats... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 2/25/2022 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! A beautiful write of life! Good Luck in the contest. :)Paulette
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/26/2022 12:03:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Paulette for the return visit, comment and the congrats... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 2/25/2022 8:28:00 AM
Anitha, this is a marvelous piece of writing, for which you should be very proud. I loved your choice of words and the way they flowed down the page. Wonderful imagery, too. Best of luck in Constance's contest. Congratulations on the P.O.T.D., too!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/25/2022 9:15:00 AM
Milton, thank you so very much for the visit, kind words of appreciation, and the congrats.. much appreciate... God bless... ~ Ani
Date: 2/25/2022 7:59:00 AM
Yes, "you should not stop you need to ignore the wrong note you struck not a wince, blink or a pause.. you have to just move on and on.. " everyday with trials and tribulations to life you keep going. Well done, Anitha, best of luck in Constance's contest. Blessing my friend
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/25/2022 9:13:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for the visit, kind words and the congrats... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 2/25/2022 7:52:00 AM
Again, again and again Anitha, your bow lifts over and above the oncoming swell, and in the cockpit your readers stay warm and dry. Congrats on the PODT
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/25/2022 9:10:00 AM
Ken, thank you so very much for the visit, kind words, and the congrats... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani
Date: 2/25/2022 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD win. Your "Notes of Life" is a beautiful write. Have a great/blessed day writing away................
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/25/2022 9:08:00 AM
Paula, thank you so very much for the visit, comment and the congrats... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 2/25/2022 6:32:00 AM
Wonderful write Anitha, Congrats on POTD
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/25/2022 6:36:00 AM
Joseph, thank you so very much for the visit, comment and the congrats...God bless...~ Ani
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