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I can not help from reading your last note 
Filled with hugs and kisses and hearts you wrote, 
Saying how much you miss me ,
Feeling sick, thinking of thee.
Why don’t you finally take off that sheep’s coat?

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  1. Date: 11/14/2010 10:26:00 AM
    That's great! Short and to the point! Brought a smile to my face. Thanks for sharing!

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 3:42:00 AM
    Chuckle, chuckle, great Limerick. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

  1. Date: 2/6/2010 10:10:00 PM
    Wow! That was an unexpected ending! Very good poetry! Thanks for sharing! Regards, Sena Slaughter