Not Welcome

CAGED! my tiny heart banging on the ribs, 72 beats a minute, to be free, to be known and to be felt. Unrest in eyes, tears of anguish that flooded have dried and a lone tear of blood took its place. Even the death has abandoned, banishing this half rotten soul. till it is fully rot or fully pure, is welcome neither in hell nor in heaven.

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/20/2014 5:24:00 AM

Well penned write and congratulations on the fine win, ravi

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2014 4:10:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest sponsored by Giorgio A.V. - A wonderful win poem from you Ravi ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 3/20/2014 1:08:00 AM

Ravi, Congrats, awesome win! ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2014 11:03:00 PM

Ravi, Impressive like the themes. Congratulations on your win. :) Love ~LINDA

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/26/2013 5:47:00 PM

powerful piece...congrats on your win :)

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/26/2013 4:39:00 AM

i like it Congrats. Morgan

Skat A

Date: 9/25/2013 9:16:00 PM

nice win Ravi,, Love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/25/2013 5:19:00 PM

Ravi,, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my Any Poem Goes contest. Exactly what I was looking for, SIMPLE-PLEASING & BEAUTIFUL- teasing the reader with such awesome imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""In The Stars"" OR my latest blog! " Animal Cruelty " at -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15953&PoetID=18720 **LINDA