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Snow is falling All around me People landing On their bum You’re heartbroken Limbs are broken Winter's an icy season So for this very reason… A & E – here we come!! Not such a merry Christmas for some 29th November 2015

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Date: 12/1/2015 6:00:00 PM
Hello Jan... always worse when accidents happen around Christmas. Hear we are in summer now and snow is falling in the high country... unbelievable - Lindsay
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/1/2015 6:04:00 PM
You can keep the snow I hate the stuff - only place it should be seen is on Christmas cards lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/1/2015 11:05:00 AM
Good story with a wonderful flow of words. Emile.
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Date: 12/1/2015 11:52:00 AM
Thanks Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/30/2015 10:49:00 AM
Good one Jan, Enjoyed reading.... LUV **SKAT**
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/30/2015 11:02:00 AM
Thanks SKAT:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/29/2015 6:33:00 PM
I love this Jan, reminds me of when I went to England many years ago and I wasn't used to the icy pavements and many times I landed on my bum, it did cause me a bit of embarrassment, the answer is stay inside, hope you are well, take care...........Vera
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Date: 11/30/2015 1:09:00 AM
Oh wise words indeed Vera - stay inside - yes I will if the snow and ice arrive:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/29/2015 4:27:00 PM
Be careful and what ever you do if you start sliding don't try to stop, you will fall, just go with it.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/29/2015 4:30:00 PM
We had one big snow but it has melted
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/29/2015 4:29:00 PM
I agree Tim - mum fell years ago and broke her wrist - I won't take her out if it is remotely slippery I couldn't take the risk of her falling - so far no snow and ice but the wintery weather is on the way:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 11/29/2015 1:59:00 PM
Sad but true poem
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/29/2015 2:04:00 PM
The A & E departments get over run with the snowy weather - I try and shop for my elderly neighbour to save her risking going out:-) hugs Jan xx

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