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a sestet Looking for that place beyond his memory, he scans time and space within the room's debris waiving the embrace requiring energy. Twisting in the settee, he finds it in his lap clicking uselessly - alas! it has no zap Lacking battery! how will he take his nap?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/23/2012 12:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "#184" contest Reason. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/22/2012 5:27:00 AM
Very nice Reason.Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/21/2012 7:40:00 PM
THis is really cute. And I really relate to it. Sometimes when I can't fall to sleep at night, I use the low sound of Tv on to lull me to sleep. (opposite of needing the remote to zap tv off!)
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Date: 6/21/2012 6:19:00 PM
super congrats on HM for this wonderful writer luv..
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Date: 6/21/2012 11:46:00 AM
Reason ,congratulations with your wonderful win in Brian's contest... Take care pd... ;-)
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Date: 6/21/2012 3:35:00 AM
Nice poem... common ailment... congratulations on your HM... Terry
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