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Not Right

something's not right. the way we used to talk, laugh and play, joke all day until....... it happened. i don't know what it was but hey..... it stopped the laughter, the fun, the playing the love. it stopped me. when i now talk to you, i feel a sudden hatred a sudden pulse of dislike that flows across mii face. what happened? im asking you 'cause somethings not right.

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Date: 8/18/2009 3:33:00 AM
Nicely written, Hosea. Sometimes in relationships we'll never know and sometimes with very good commication things can improve. In my poem"The Piano" the idea came from a movie. It is not refering to me necessarily. Keep writing. Sara
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