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As a writer of fiction novels, I positively basked in my work, Story ideas lived in my head, as blue stars at twilight lurk. Yes, I was a successful writer, and had many zealous readers, As vee shaped birds of azure skies, ever follow their leaders! My life was then so interesting, and I was doing what I loved, As sweetness of summer blooms, lingers where bees have buzzed. My office had a picture window, which overlooked lush garden, Which was frequently visited, by a richness of purple martin! As the world swayed to summer, in solemn and endless rhythm, Vividness spilt all over the land, through a mellow solar prism. After writing for hours one day, I desired to take a break, Like the sun just when he's going, bestows beauty's keepsake. While enjoying my cold drink, as I was relaxing on the porch, From the trees came a Silver Knight, carrying his golden torch! In wide eyed shock I stared, for he'd stepped out of my novel, As a mole eager for light of day, is emerging from its hovel. He came toward me all gallantry, before suddenly disappearing, As the pearly moon often does, just when the dawn is nearing! I sat and gazed at the place he'd been, not believing my eyes, As so often it is hard to credit, bounty's fantastic surprise. I had written for long years, and never had suchlike occurred, As grass if it turned cherry red, might be deemed too absurd! I sat there in bumblebee sunshine, reviewing the recent past, As nature makes of valued moments, bronzed memories that last! There were no more visions, 'til a backyard cookout one Tuesday, As friends and family reveled in, a citrine hot weather holiday! I'd just had my turn at the grill, and was resting in the shade, When along came my dragon, puffing fire, in fantastic masquerade. I knew Percival at once, for he had sauntered right off my pages, Like an ancient masterpiece, in contemporary times, still ageless. One thing I soon noticed, was that no one shared these visions, So that reality and my fantasy, avoided a tremendous collision. As silken night and golden day, meet swiftly at dusk or dawn, And only during the hours, when most people are going or gone! Much later as I was retiring, I saw a scary figure in the hall, And I knew it was the Bogeyman, familiar as the crickets' call. For what reason these fantastic visions, fine but out of place? Why had imagination come visiting, as footsteps on a staircase? In the ensuing days I saw mermaids, unicorns, fairies and more, Like a compelling urge to get out, when sunshine's at the door! The visions never faded away, and I still see them to this day. No more do they bother me-I know it's just imagination at play. And imagination is a good thing, as it brings color to our lives, As the sun gives colors to blooms, in zones where beauty thrives. But I guess my musing is different, somehow exceptionally vivid, Like the purple red hues of sunset, that make the skies so livid!

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Date: 4/11/2021 11:46:00 AM
WoW! Evelyn, You outdid yourself with this one. Your storytelling skills are excellent. You had me hook, line and sinker. You were able to take your reader on a fascinating journey. Your content and imagery were filled with imagination and fantasy. Wouldn't it be something if books came alive right before our eyes? Excellent job, my friend. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/11/2021 3:45:00 PM
I'm so pleased with your enjoyment of this tale, Alexis. It's truly heartwarming. Thank you for all of your lovely remarks, and for making this journey better for me. Have a lovely evening, my friend. :=) Evelyn
Date: 4/10/2021 3:14:00 PM
Wonderful lovely imagery, and I’m absolutely positive you are a great writer that I need to follow, this one is going to my favorite, all those stances are brilliant and they just penetrate the heart. Thanks for sharing and thanks for writing such a great poem Have a blessed evening and best regards
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/10/2021 4:48:00 PM
You are most welcome-sharing is my joy. I am so very honored by your many kind remarks, Lasaad, and also to have you as a follower. Thank you for taking the time to considerably brighten my day. Have a blessed evening as well, my friend.
Date: 4/10/2021 12:53:00 AM
Thank God my horror books don't come alive. Loved your story, so optimistic and colorful. Great imagination.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/10/2021 9:26:00 AM
A fertile imagination is an asset to any writer. Thank you for your gracious comment. :D
Date: 4/9/2021 7:38:00 PM
Beautiful, rich imagery, Evelyn. I enjoyed your poem, particularly your rhymes and near-rhymes...very creative!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/9/2021 8:17:00 PM
Thank you for the warm and wonderful compliment, L Milton. Your words are a great inspiration.
Date: 4/9/2021 6:19:00 PM
A lovely write, Evelyn...your imagination boundless! Love the “purple martin” I had never heard of that songbird.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/9/2021 8:23:00 PM
Thank you for the smiles you bring, Kim, and for showing such appreciation. :D

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