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Not Quite In the Plastic Bag

The cashier guy was eyeing her In ways enthusiastic. She thought that he was cute as well; His smile was just fantastic. She took her ponytail apart, Removing the elastic; And struck a sexy pose, a move A bit extreme and drastic. Alas, it didn’t work because He uttered, quite sarcastic. “Calm down there, miss – and would you like A paper bag or plastic?”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/6/2012 6:31:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 3/4/2012 7:42:00 PM
Cute! I enjoyed the read...smiling. BG
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Date: 3/3/2012 5:49:00 AM
Congratulations Ilene cute and a very nice piece xx
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:56:00 PM
A cutie. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/2/2012 7:03:00 PM
Ilene... congratulations! In Susan's contest....Enjoyed stopping by to view may winners tonight!! Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 3/2/2012 4:49:00 PM
Ilene, very creative. Congrats on winning Susan's contest.....................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 3/2/2012 2:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and thanks for supporting my contest! So funny!
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Date: 3/2/2012 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Paper Or Plastic" contest Ilene. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:15:00 AM
What a delighfully fun read! Funny, witty and the words just dance off your tongue with exquisite meter and flow. A true honor to share top spot in the contest with this poem. Joe
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Date: 2/29/2012 12:43:00 PM
The best to you in the contest Ilene. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/29/2012 12:02:00 PM
Love it. Hope you do well in the contest. Mike
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Date: 2/28/2012 8:43:00 PM
hahaha, How embarrassing!!! THis is a really fun one to read. I much enjoyed it.
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Date: 2/28/2012 3:39:00 PM
Nicely done Ilene. Good luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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