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Not In Love

Not in love? he asked Over and over again There was a silence Indignant towards her Not in love? he asked again Leaning towards her Over the dinner table Vacant look on her face Evident that she meant every word. Hazel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/11/2012 2:06:00 PM
Ouch! That must have hurt him. I guess the vacant look conveyed all he needed to hear. Nicely written Hazel!
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Hazel Connelly
Date: 10/11/2012 2:11:00 PM
Thanks Vicky.
Date: 10/8/2012 9:09:00 AM
she didn't even blink,lol,great write Hazel,lol yep she's serious
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Hazel Connelly
Date: 10/8/2012 11:16:00 AM
ha, ha, that's right Richard.

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