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Not Ice Cream

the left screams, the right screams, we all scream but it's no dream

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/8/2024 6:54:00 AM

A cute poem.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/7/2024 5:51:00 PM

Nice twist on the old saw, Jerry! btw: Can I have that in a plain cone? ... But no fries with that, ok?

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 5/7/2024 1:20:00 PM

We all need to keep praying harder, my friend. Have a great day Jerry.

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/7/2024 4:08:00 AM

very clever,, and original "sentence", thanks Jerry

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/6/2024 4:16:00 PM

a clever re-write of the familiar saying. I dislike all the 'screaming' for screaming's sake. Whatever happened to listening and being civil? Okay, I better not get started :-) have a pleasant evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/6/2024 12:08:00 PM

Calls for quiet prayer. Blessings, dear one.