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Not Hindered

T ime's hands move slowly H indered not by a rush E very second a gentle flow W hen will the call come A lready anticipating I nterlude's crumbs T otal silence in patient's room

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Date: 1/17/2014 8:02:00 AM
time seems to move slow when we wait for a result or decision, dara.. so well defined i can feel the anticipation.. wonderful acrostic.. huggs
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Date: 1/16/2014 9:21:00 PM
wow, this is really good, Sara. Great mood created by this.
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Date: 1/16/2014 5:41:00 PM
I know exactly what you mean, especially when you are awaiting some news from a test! I hope you weren't at the Dr's office for too long my friend! This is a fabulous write based on this event Sara! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/16/2014 3:57:00 PM
Very reflective Sara; and holds its own intensity..'
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Date: 1/16/2014 3:53:00 PM
I could imagine being there in that waiting room too, my friend
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Date: 1/16/2014 12:37:00 PM
Dear Sara, Waiting in a doctor's office always evokes anxiety. You described this eloquently in your creative write! Love, Carolyn
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