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I look at your bed, made nice and neat. Blankets and pillows cleaned, yet their empty. Nothing in it, no arms, no feet. Your clothes all folded, no dirty ones to be washed, No clean ones to be worn, for you Not here with me. Your toys and books all put away! Your just not here to play Today. Your empty plates sit at the table, I can’t eat without you, I’m Just not able. No kids here tonight to tuck into bed. No Goodnight kiss to give on your Head. I hope my loves are tucked all nice and tight And think of mommy threw out the Night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/12/2010 8:46:00 AM
aww, that is such a sweet poem :)
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Date: 11/10/2010 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Linn. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2010 4:02:00 PM
Congradulations on having your poem featured Linn, I am pleased to have read this, enjoyed, and best wishes to your upcoming days..P.D.
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Date: 9/7/2010 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Linn. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/20/2010 6:12:00 PM
a bit sad as we all are to let go....welcome to the soup!
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Date: 5/20/2010 8:36:00 AM
This is so wonderful. It reminds me of my children. They are all grown and are off into the world. Now I can get out of my bed without making it. Great job, Blessings!
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Date: 5/20/2010 6:19:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Linn. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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