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Pick Up Lines For Valentines Day Poetry

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/29/2024 2:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/29/2024 7:30:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your winner. Sara K

I Am Anaya
Date: 1/29/2024 8:48:00 AM

Thank you, Sara and congrats on yours!

Suzette Richards

Date: 1/29/2024 5:05:00 AM

Now, if a guy wants to intrigue a girl, he needs to tell her that it would not work out ... I loved the mix of the meter (as they discussed in the link provided on my contest page). Congratulations on your placement with this Limerick that includes many layers of interpretation.

I Am Anaya
Date: 1/29/2024 8:47:00 AM

The chase whets the appetite! I'm delighted to have been placed on your list, Suzette. :D Working on being a poet of substance. haha

Bill Baker

Date: 1/24/2024 9:02:00 PM

I like it, and the picture is really cute. :-) Good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill

I Am Anaya
Date: 1/27/2024 12:28:00 PM

Thank you, Bill!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/24/2024 12:45:00 PM

Yes, it is wrong to take another's work and say it is your own. One should always use quotation marks and give credit if it is a told quote of another person. If it is a springboard from which to write something else, then that is different. I like the topic; the work is good, and the picture is so adorable. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K

I Am Anaya
Date: 1/27/2024 12:29:00 PM

Thank you, Sara! Love the avatar!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/24/2024 8:33:00 AM

Quite a fun poem but need deep understanding.

I Am Anaya
Date: 1/24/2024 10:04:00 AM

Not the typical, thank you, Victor!

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 1/23/2024 4:53:00 PM

Cute and so clever, my friend. Nice one Anaya.

I Am Anaya
Date: 1/24/2024 10:04:00 AM

Thank you, Jerry!

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/23/2024 12:19:00 PM

Very clever and quite ingenious (probably the same thing) I do love to see unorthodox thinking, or thinking outside the box, (probably the same thing again) my point being, this one is not the same, it’s completely unique and different, brilliant, oh! and cute photo, cheers David

I Am Anaya
Date: 1/23/2024 4:39:00 PM

I like them both! ha I can't help it, my nature to see the big picture. Thanks for all your nice reviews, I trust you, Cheers ~Anaya Here it's New Hamshire Primary Tuesday! heehaa "Go Nikki Haley!" De Santis is O-U-T

Silent One

Date: 1/23/2024 10:02:00 AM

Nice one! this seems a lot deeper though than what you have written here..

I Am Anaya
Date: 1/23/2024 11:33:00 AM

Oh, look below, SP called me Karen, I went with it LOL (not my name)

Silent One
Date: 1/23/2024 10:43:00 AM

Why are you calling yourself Karen?

I Am Anaya
Date: 1/23/2024 10:38:00 AM

Oh, no, a spin on it, I didn't want to use the usual pick-up lines (there are lists of them on the internet) it was boring and so I took it to the next level of Valentine rhymes that are corny and so (although this may not work without the image above) his lines are someone else's copyrights, and I took it from there. I learned so much about it by uploading a manuscript with clipart in it etc. I'm redoing the book in watercolors, design and illustration! haha, you may be right, SO. ~hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/23/2024 6:49:00 AM

Karen, Infringing on the copyright of copied lines is certainly not acceptable; one ought to, in reality, attempt to create original words and be humorous. What a clever limerick! Your creativity is admirable; this is an immensely ingenious limerick.

I Am Anaya
Date: 1/23/2024 10:40:00 AM

Yes indeed, SP, I took it to the next level. Thank you, I'm flattered ~hugs, Anaya

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/23/2024 12:05:00 AM

Oh my, the picture that you've used is so cute dear Anaya, I absolutely love it! And what a witty limerick, copyright infringement of pick-up lines is definitely not done, one should try to invent new lines lol & be unique.. I like your thought here, a very creative limerick with right amount of humor and cuteness too, hahaa.. Enjoyed reading this, best wishes for the contest! :) sending you love & light..

I Am Anaya
Date: 1/23/2024 10:42:00 AM

Thank you, Hiya! Wow I'm flattered, I wasn't sure about this one, but if you enjoyed it, it's all I need! Thank you ~Hugs Anaya

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